Trunks's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[F Zero Mute city remix 3 !]

:D

Great drums! If the lead was big and crunchy and ran together a bit, it would've sounded completely and utterly perfect. This is still pretty damn close, excellent job ^_^

4/5

Gorekiller responds:

hehehe ! Thank you ! Yeah, I should have tell Metalrules-rapsucks ( one of my friends ) to make the guitar part. I should remake this till I hit the perfection. Thanks for your words ! BTW, don't worry about your Zelda remix ! I'll help you for remaking this ! Contac me :
[e-mail]
Peace out, my friend.

[Paper Mario 2 : Bowser]

Nice job, pretty good

Not as good as some of your other stuff, but close to the song, although the lead was a bit... I dunno, off-pitch.

I liked the drums, albeit a bit repetitive.

3/5

Gorekiller responds:

Yep. Indeed, I don't love this tune( without hating it). I'm not waiting for high scores you know. I haven't spent enough time doin' this. Anyway, thanks for your support man !

[Sonic : Green Hill]

Nice one :D

Great sample for the lead, I really liked the whole song. Oh, how many time's I've played this game over and over again :)

Gorekiller responds:

...indeed, I haven't played the original game ! I've played the Sonic Advance 2 and 3 episode ! I 've also played the "Rush" episode on nintendo DS. That's all for today. Once again, thanks for the cool review !

[[Undead Rave 2 g-R]]

nice one :D

Not really industrial, more of techno, but if there were more echos on the drums it would fit. I see why you said industrial because of those hits in the back and the sharp drums, so... k.

Great song, fast-paced, might find use for this =D =D =D

g-r4ve responds:

who cares what genre it is :D lol

[Dance to the beat]

=D

I'd say this is much more of Trance or Dance than Techno, a little mismatch there. Although those pads give it an interesting feel.

Good song, get me head-bobbing. And once that head lead came in I see why you though techno.

Great job.

Aaron-Miller responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you like it. And yes, it was sort of a mix of trance and dance so I put it all together to make Techno! lol. Thanks again!

[oMinouS dancefloor (cool song)]

Nice :D

I liked this song, the pads are nice but a little loud for the rest of the song.

I'm digging the beat :D Very hard beat, not too blaringly loud but nice and jumpy and the second melody was very uplifting. And nice classic chord progression with the bass :D

Liked it a lot, I'm DL'ing it ^_^

Also, cymbals are great for transitions when you add new stuff in.

Music-story responds:

Yah thanks. Another NG member that likes happy songs. Off topic...to all reviewers who like the whole rave thing plz be fair when marking. I review classical music though it may not be my fav, but I always think in my head what I would think if I did like classical. Likewise rave lovers please do the same. I can't make a song that suits everyones taste. Anyway, your song is great to Trunks. :) :)

[Acid drum]

Advice

It's really offbeat, the strings and the drums do not match at all.

And there ends the asshole portion of my review.

In Fruity Loops, in the song - creator thingy, where there are blocks n shit to add the patterns you make to the song (assuming that's how you go about it) click on the icon towards the right at the top of that window to pull up a menu that'll say things like "line", "column", and "row". Click the one under those that says "Cell".

When you add new things into the beat, make sure it's after 4 or 8 measures of the other beats playing together for a while. And make sure it starts right on the line of the cell (the cells are the small blocks)

I hope you understand that, because you make good melodies and beats, but can't string them together as well as you have the potential to. If you do that, then you will become GREAT with music.

Tanooki-John responds:

I don't have fruity loops though, but since I have my own computer now, I can take more time with music than I did in town. I also have more opportunities to do some training but I need to find more convinent time when im not disturbed or too tired. But next time I submit another track, it will be better than what I posted in the past. Thanks.

[Ghost In Shell Remix]

hmm

This would've been an amazing song if you didn't put the vocals in, because the vocals don't really match the song. It's hard to nail that BPM... but this song would've been absolutely AMAZING without the vocals, you're music sounds alright but sometimes you get the execution off.

Good job with the actual song.

[Depths of the Heart]

:D:D

I really liked it, I have no idea why it has such a small score. Apparently Acid Pro is a good program, I might check it out sometime :D

Nice work, sounded nice.

[Roulette- SOAD Acoustic]

=D

Not perfect but nice playing... nice and calm. Good job.